Sunday, May 02, 2010

mixed feelings


Can somebody 

tell me
what constitutes as 
right or wrong in this 
situation...

Am i too forgiving?
...

I don't know whether
to stay away from you
or not. 

Or am i quick to forgive
because

i want to...?

Sigh...I'm just praying 
that 
regardless of what just happened,

You (still?) need me 
just as much 

As i need you.    

2 Comments:

Blogger f i o n a said...

i like it!! ^-^

9:52 PM  
Blogger Luindilwen said...

awww...i really like those doors...

maybe forgiveness is just a mask for apathy...ooohh...^^...and i think 'still' is good it helps the rhythm but i think you need to remove just. without a 'do' infront of the sentence or a question mark the sentence could be taken as an imperative or a masked question??

8:45 PM  

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