her eyes, her eyes
I wish the fish would just eat me.
Because i don't want to grow up.
But i know that you do.
I wish for more sushi.
Because eating them makes me happy.
But i know this happiness ends after three mouthfuls.
I wish i knew where i was going.
Because then i would open up my heart more.
But i'm still feeling lost.
I wish this made sense.
Because then we could eat jelly together.
But for now...
Something is wrong with me.
posted by FROGGY at 6:09 PM
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tercets...^^ this is interesting...chan's use of vast sea imagery emphasises the theme of lost...though the ordinary act of eating sushi is at first subverted by having the fish eat her...perhaps there is undertones of a loss of power as the act of 'eating'or triumphing makes her 'happy'...the use of jelly is also interesting as it alludes to the poisonous jelly fish. After the sad note of feeling lost which complements the trasient happiness, eating poisonous jelly fish seems to be an allusion to bi-polar emotions and potentially suicidal actions. The ending that something is 'wrong with' her pehaps supports this claim. ><???? LOOOOLLL vivi!!!!
LOLLLLL your commentary made me laugh. aw haha
well i think i've eaten enough sushi in the past week to feel normal again ^^
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